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E.R.Dyal's avatar

This was a nice read. I think there were some really strong elements here. I can see this being perfect for a play or an episode in a short anthology on tv. Its good work, keep at it.

Jon's avatar

Hi Levi, I am a reader on this platform and look forward to your work given the tone of your opening section.

I have shared this with family and friends that I think will appreciate your talent.

I am not a Luddite but I don’t use my phone for $$. I know that must seem odd in this day and age—Still often with tech,better safe than…

But I will do so when I am back on my Mac. I hope that will be sufficient.

Stay the course! God Speed.

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